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ESSAY
What makes school better? I tell you what in a few moments first Ill introduce my self, Im Thomas Ray Gonzalez I
Attend Eagles Peak, I am 14 years old and what I think what will make school better is... A gym room with A/C so
That way kids will be fit and stay cool.
what also is good for school is having a grass field
for a safer break area. We also learn to interact with
each other and get along.
what I also think is good is having a water and snack
break to get fuel for more learning and plus we need energy
to be active and learn.
What I think what will be fun and educational is to have field trips around the community to have a little taste on what’s going on in are beautiful communities when we are in school working.
I think another good way to learn is to visit different countries we could experience how they live and know about there culture. We could learn how to interact with each other even if they speak another language.
Another way of learning is by having more ARTS.
These are probably the best way we well send the money if you give us any.
These things will help students learn, be active, and to interact with others.
ARTS,grassfield to be safer, educational field trips, P.E room with A/C to be physically fit, and to visit other countries so we won’t feel that schools aren’t worth it, Because we know they realy are.
BY:
Thomas Ray Gonzalez