Tuesday, September 30, 2008

MY Essay

What we kids want for school Do you remember when you went to school? Do you remember wanting more things for your school, but your school didn’t have enough money for those things. Well that’s what the kids at my school are thinking like right now. We want more things at our school to improve in education, and help us for our future. In the next few paragraphs I’m going to tell you the things that we want. I’m also going to explain why we need these things.More Electives so the first thing is more electives. Why do we need more electives may you ask. We kids need more time to socialize. I know that’s what lunch is for and break, but we want more time to talk. We also want more electives because we want to explore and try new things. Electives give us more time to talk to teachers and friends. We want more opportunities.More Space The next thing we want is more space. Our school is a charter school and we really don’t have a lot of space because we are a small school, but we do need a lot of space actually. We want grass fields because we play a lot of sports. We play soccer, football, baseball, you name it. We need grass because all we have is cement and it’s really easy to get hurt. Plus we have a school next to us and sometimes we kick the ball over or throw it over. We also have like a swamp next to us and we sometimes kick it over there to. We need a bigger place to eat because we are too close together and we need are space. We also need to move are school because in are classes we are all to close together. We need a place for P.E.After school ActivatesThe final thing that we want is after school activities. This is the most important one. Not all kids can be picked up on time. Some parents have other kids to pick up. Some parents are too busy or don’t have time. In some cases kids don’t want to go home. We want to do some sports after school. We really want after school activities because we see that some kids are over weight now these days.So do you rember now? If not this is what we want. This is what we need. I explained to you why we need these stuff. So please help us.

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