Thursday, September 11, 2008

Jasmine Aileen Cruz: Essay1

9-11-08


I think we could use a janitor so we can have clean bathrooms and a clean lunch area. We should school supplies provided for us so we don’t have to buy supplies for the whole school.
With this money, we cold have a better, clean school. In my terms, we would have a cooler place to hang out and a good learning environment. What else would be a good learning environment would be a place that’s not so much hidden behind tree.
Maybe, just maybe, we could move to a better place where we loose all of our sports equipment. Somewhere that’s not so hidden.
Last but not least, we could use some sports equipment for us to use. There really isn’t enough for us that wants to play foot ball. But maybe that could change . . . please? We could use about two or three more, right? Thank you very much for your time.
Hopefully you listened.



Signed,
Jasmine A. Cruz

2 comments:

Julia T. said...

that was good jasmine!

Julia T. said...

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