Language arts
Mr. R
Raquel Ortigoza
09/09/0-8
Do you really know what we kids need to improve school? In the next paragraph I will be giving ideas and proving why we
need certain privileges’.
“More Electives”
Why we need more electives you may ask? We need more electives, because the school doesn’t give us enough time to socialize with teachers and friends.
In electives we can have certain activities that help us later on in career life. For example, I would like to be a designer, in a designing career you will have to socialize with the top designer to sell your designs. Also in other electives it can help us develop more brain juice, for example computers, they also help for jobs. Computers will help us to do job applications or presentations.
“More space”
In school, sometimes I feel claustrophobic, because the rooms are super small. We need more space please; all we do during physical education is play in one and only team a simple game. We can’t play a big game. We can’t play a big game like soccer, we only have a small blacktop are for P.E no grass area so we have to play for example dodge ball. Also we need a larger lunch area. Sometimes in lunch, I get my lunch mixed up with my neighbor’s lunch, it’s that bad.
“After School Programs”
You know sometimes my parents can’t pick me up on time for school that is one reason, why we need after school programs. I think it’s cruel when they call the cop’s when parents are maybe caught in traffic or other explainable reasons. Another reason is so we can have extra help in certain subjects we have trouble in. The last reason for after school programs is to have a safe place supervised by adult’s to hang out and active. Kids lately are so over weight, after school programs can help us do activities, to lower risks of over weight kids and obesity.
“Conclusion”
In conclusion we need so many things to help us improve school, kids and I have agreed to come up with three very common problems- more electives, more space and after school program activities.
Mr. R
Raquel Ortigoza
09/09/0-8
Do you really know what we kids need to improve school? In the next paragraph I will be giving ideas and proving why we
need certain privileges’.“More Electives”
Why we need more electives you may ask? We need more electives, because the school doesn’t give us enough time to socialize with teachers and friends.
In electives we can have certain activities that help us later on in career life. For example, I would like to be a designer, in a designing career you will have to socialize with the top designer to sell your designs. Also in other electives it can help us develop more brain juice, for example computers, they also help for jobs. Computers will help us to do job applications or presentations.
“More space”
In school, sometimes I feel claustrophobic, because the rooms are super small. We need more space please; all we do during physical education is play in one and only team a simple game. We can’t play a big game. We can’t play a big game like soccer, we only have a small blacktop are for P.E no grass area so we have to play for example dodge ball. Also we need a larger lunch area. Sometimes in lunch, I get my lunch mixed up with my neighbor’s lunch, it’s that bad.
“After School Programs”
You know sometimes my parents can’t pick me up on time for school that is one reason, why we need after school programs. I think it’s cruel when they call the cop’s when parents are maybe caught in traffic or other explainable reasons. Another reason is so we can have extra help in certain subjects we have trouble in. The last reason for after school programs is to have a safe place supervised by adult’s to hang out and active. Kids lately are so over weight, after school programs can help us do activities, to lower risks of over weight kids and obesity.
“Conclusion”
In conclusion we need so many things to help us improve school, kids and I have agreed to come up with three very common problems- more electives, more space and after school program activities.
2 comments:
hahah i like urs
HEEEEYYYY raquel i like ur i deas i think you should be like a teacher or something love, secret paper ball thrower=)
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