Thursday, September 11, 2008

barbara: revised version♥

we live in a coutry where we prde ourselves on freedom and the right to be an individual, school should be the place where that starts. we as students believe that we should have more creative arts classes, more community field trips and better physical education. These classes would help ecpand our learing past what we have been taught for many years.

one thing we would like to improve in schools would be more community field trips. By going on community fiels trips we would be able to take advantage of the leatning oppertunities in our community. Not only will students be able to be out in the community but they will also be having hands on learning experiences that will het students more interested in leatning. Going out into our nieghboorhood will open our minds to the education around us. By witnessing the education around us students will also be able to witness our envorment and ways to improve it.

Speaking of improvments, obessidy has become the number one cause of death in the u.s. and now more than ever physical education has become just as important as mental education. In order far all students to be able to participate in physical activities we need to improve the equipment to fit the capabilities of all students. In order to make this happen we need a comfortable phisilty to fit the different capabilities of each student in order to create a safe enviorment. Improving out physical education programs and physilities will result in healthy and ready to learn students.

The perfect example of a ready to larn individual is leaonardo da vinci he is the perfect example of how art and drama bring out the strongest intellegences within us. Bringing in more creative arts classes will expand students learning past basic English and arithmetic. Drama and art classes help tp teach most students anout geometry , literature, culture and social skills. Studies show that most students learn better when they get to be hands on and physical. So adding more creative arts clsses would improve students abilities to learn. They also absorb more knowledge working with their peers rather than just their teachers and while in these arts classes they will be able to experience that. Think of these creative arts classes as the first flower of spring, the symbol of more flowering oppertuunities ahead.

Please know that as students we will go to great lengths to have these goals met wheather that takes fundraisers or any type of event to raise money. Keep in mind we cannot do this on our own. The educational goals and improvments that we have mentioned, such as more community field trips, better physical education and more creative arts classes, will certainly exceed the learning mothods that have been used for such a long period of time. We have learned that there are a variety of different intelligences and we doubt you want to allow yourself to feel like you have been apart of depriving us from finding ours. So we ask you please consider our ideas and help us to transform them into reality.

1 comment:

Julia T. said...

hiii barbara
i love youe essay its really interesting to me..
and i think its good!!
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-BrIdGeTtE♥♥♥